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٢٤ - كبسولة نقدية : كلمات متقاطعة روائية 6

AHMED EL ANSARY أحمد الأنصاري

21 Jun, 2024

روايتين مقدرتش اكملهم .. واحدة بيست سيلر والتانية حائزة على جائزة افضل رواية فئة الشباب.. الاولى بتاعت البيست سيلر فيها مشكلة من اول صفحة فيها.. وكأنها اطبعت بدون محرر لغوى واللى مهمته بجانب تصحيح الاخطاء النحوية..تصويب ضمائر السرد او السارد.. بجانب استخدام بعض الكلمات والحروف فى غير موضعها.. واتعجبت انه برغم مرور سنين على طبعها محدش التفت لده وبرغم انها اصدار دار نشر مرموقة جدا..اجد هذا الضعف البين فيها؟

الرواية التانية صاحبة الجايزة..هو الفن مهمته تصوير الحدث وفقط؟ يمكن كان دور الرواية ما قبل ظهور وسائل التصوير المرئى تقوم بالدور ده.. ومكنتش وقتها تقدر تنقد ده.. يمكن مع ظهور سينما الوثائق..خففت عبء عن الرواية ..لان الصورة تعبر بلغة مختلفة وفعلا كانت اقوى من لغة الوصف.. رواية بدون عنصر فنى احسه مع لغة الوصف..تتحول الى رواية لغو لمجرد اللغو ..حتى لو كنت تملك ادوات لغوية جيدة.. اين العنصر الفنى فى الرواية؟

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